CastlesInTheSky

III - Carnival This is such a big mistake. She cannot believe her mother has brought them here. A blur of coloured Christmas lights arc between the happy faces of ...

Okay people, chapter five!!!! I've noticed I'm kind of getting a following here with this story. I'm getting kind of nervous about disappointing...god I hope every one likes this...!!!! Here ...

Thankyou so much for your help :D Ersatz isn't a person, hehe :lol: It's an adjective meaning pretence or something. I suppose it could be confused as a person's name, ...

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Hi! I'm Sarah and I'll be your reviewer for today. Looks promising :D Walking down a lane, The incessant rain shrouds me. This is an excellent first couple of lines. ...

I would say that this is quite a good poem, but i didnt get the meaning very much. Try forming a clearer 'image' next time so it can give the ...

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Chapter 10 “So, Amelia,” said Susannah with her usual sentence starter. “How’ve you been?” True to form, I gave her my usual reply. “Uh...fine.” She had been giving me the ...

“What started out as a sweet young artist on the rise, turned into the pill poppin,’ booze drinkin,’ party animal we see today as Samantha Dunn. We all loved her ...

I wrote the second part to see if this is really going somewhere. If it just sounds dumb, please tell me. Seriously, it would be great if I didn't waste ...

Nothing out of the ordinary ever happens in Seekonk, Massachusetts. This could be a great introductory sentence or not, based on the audience. I think it's a sliiightly bit cliched, ...

Thanks so much, Sapphire and everyone else who took time to review. It is vastly appreciated. Here is the edited version: Part II : Chapter 8 Two Years Later... Dad ...

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My answer is yes. Of course I approve of interracial dating. Forgive me for sounding cheesy, but as long as you love the person, race shouldn't matter at all. This ...

A small part of me wanted to shut my eyes, run past the doors up to my room and pull the covers over my head. A very small part of ...