CastlesInTheSky

Hey! One tip - use the enter button a lot! it will mean more people reviewing. Quote: Reading was a new habit I had picked up from my cousin Vannessa. ...

Chapter 9 It was seven in the morning on the first day back at school after the summer, and I felt all the groggy misery that went with that fact. ...

You look gorgeous and your dress is beautiful.

Fortunately, they all took large doses of benzodiazepine and recovered from their madness.

I agree with Sapphire. You have a wonderful attitude, much better than mine. And as long as you love the piece you are writing, why worry about cliches? If you ...

II - Raindrop She's being followed. She can see them watching her as she walks along the rough cobblestones. She doesn’t want them to turn around; she doesn’t want them ...

When I write in word, I tend to use good old TNR, single spaced, size 12. Woo! Times New Roman FTW! I'm trying to fight against the evil powers of ...

Hey, Well I'm glad you didn't take offence. Seeing as the whole thing isn't going to be about celebrities' lives, I might well read on and give you more review ...

Its just like any other degeneratly used word out there, no big deal. Oh, but it is. You have no idea how damaging the word can be to someone with ...

:lol: Well, good luck with the training! Have a rave! Oh yeah and most of us on here are for darker, sadder stories anyway. There's barely any sugar-coated stuff on ...

Hehe yep I did write my first novel at 7. Not the most eloquent piece of work I'd ever write. xxx

Thankyou so much, Sapphire. That was incredibly helpful. I'll edit it on the document I have and then when I have time I'll make the changes to the YWS version ...

midnightwolf - I'm not sure whether you're being sarcastic or not. If you were being sarcastic, then I"m really sorry to anyone who thought I was rude by my post. ...

Thankyou for the compliment Bella and Wisemann Compliments about my looks are quite rare, so you made my day. Thankyou. xxx

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