CastlesInTheSky

This is the second part of a true story. It needs a lot of work. I know I've alternated between past tense in the first part and present tense in ...

Heavily Edited! To read second part, click here:

The big tour bus pulled up out side of the Honda Centre in Los Angeles California. Outside is one word. Oh, and 'big' is a very weak adjective. You can ...

Author's Note: I needed to let this out of my system. It’s the first story I’ve written that’s based on my life. Thanks so much for reading PROLOGUE - Balloon ...

Hi, do you think you could critique my chapter story? Here's a link to Chapter One : Tell me if you can't find the following chapters and I'll send you ...

Thanks jasmine12 Yep, there were two people talking. Thanks for telling me. Aww your grandmother had framed gloves? That's sweet :) Thanks for reviewing! Keep Writing. --Sarah

Oh :shock: Hardly anyone else seems to have a problem writing from the POV of the opposite sex. I'm such a freak of nature :lol: x

Thankyou! Salsashanno - I just realised I've been spelling your name wrong all this time...sorry. :D Thanks so much, your comments were extremely motivating. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I ...

Thanks so much Sashalno! Was really helpful!

Thanks so much Sashalno! Was really helpful!

Once again, I wrote this about a year ago and began to rewrite and edit it some time ago. My spelling and grammar is really bad. Just a warning. Enjoy. ...

Thankyou so much for reading the chapter, Gee. You were very helpful :D X

Bonjour :D I speak French fluently so here's some edits, ignore it when I leave out accents, it's because my computer won't do them. La peur vive dans son placard ...

Thanks Demeter... will try to condense description. x

Oh dear :( :( You are all so gorgeous I feel unworthy of posting. There is not a single ugly person on this topic so far. That might well change ...