CatStiles

Thanks for the comment - I'm going to address what you've said a bit at a time. 1. The silhouette is created by front-lighting (and as a techie, I assure ...

I think what you need to think about more is the why? factor: Why do her parents tell her in the car where perhaps a home setting is more appropriate? ...

This is the very first scene of my play (which has yet to be titled even though Act 1 is almost done). It's basically setting up the tone and pace ...

This one caught my eye because I am (for want of a better word) a fan of Edgar Allen Poe. I think what you're doing well in this extract is ...