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CateRose17

CateRose17

  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: A Life In A Nutshell (WARNING : may be triggering to some)

    Your story has touched me in many ways. It's raw, honest and like ripped out of your journal or something. I too have experienced at least three quarters of these ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Ash - Chapter 1

    You leave my heart in shambles. The feels omgggggg. Anywayyyyyys. The grammar was nice and rolled together smoothly. Your choice of words was amazing, I love it. You had me ...

    Mar 23, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    I loved the way you presented this. We have a similar way of writing. The story was so upbeat and left me at the edge of my seat and it ...

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Depression is a Liquid

    Ummmm wow... Just whoa...This has made depression so much clearer to me. I myself have depression. And it is the most awful thing. And you're right, depression fills every part ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: The Beauty of A Savior

    YES YES YES and AMEN. Finally someone of alike faith! Beautiful words and concept, you just need a little help with the format. If you were making up your own ...

    Mar 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I Left Her in Nebraska.

    Oh my lord...This was beautiful. The imagery and the words were perfect, it took me on a journey that was too short. By this poem and by the many titles ...

    Mar 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Huntress, Chapter 1: Pack (Book 1 in the Wolfsbane Chronicles)

    omg... I loved this. It was like mysterious and I love mysteries. It had me asking questions and then you answering them right after I asked them, which is amazing. ...

    Mar 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Firebreed chapter 1-- Red Stained Note (Edit)

    Very interesting, and perfect name. I liked the way you wrote this. Only a few minor issues. A few typos: Defiantly was meant to be 'definitely' I believe. Ummmm, what ...

    Mar 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Sannio - The World As We Know It

    ohhhhh this is good. Yes, very good. I sense something is going to happen and I'm going to love it. The only tidbit of advice I think I should give ...

    Mar 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: i can be your cup of tea.

    The name immediately caught my attention as creative, quirky and original. Dare I say...cute? I loved how you used the words to put together a very homey and comfortable atmosphere ...

    Mar 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Shatter Me

    oh...lord... did you legit just write that? Like wow. I can relate totally to this by so much! Your words are a tad overused like a previous reviewer had said, ...

    Mar 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Oh Beautiful Ones

    Ummmm holy cow, my friend. This was an amazing piece of poetry. Like the prior reviewer said:" it means different things to different people." And I LOVE that about this ...

    Mar 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Escape

    Goodness... this was soooo good. I could almost hear the sounds of the waves though I live around 6 hours from any sea. The lay out was perfect, smooth and ...

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Lyrics » Politics, Realistic Re: The War of 2017

    Hey! Cate here :) First thing's first, I am surprised that you are the only one that has written on this topic of Trump and Hillary because there so many ...

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Down

    Wow... The way the words flowed together reminded me of a painting with sharp and bold red paint brush strokes with soft strokes of blue undertones that faded into purple ...

    Dec 7, 2016


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