CateRose17

Hey! No, you were not being rude or harsh at all. I posted this to be critiqued, so go right ahead and give it to me :) I don't know ...

Yeah! I've noticed on mine it doesn't do italics when I paste too. Weird. I am glad I saw the comparison. That was a VERY smart move on your part. ...

Thank you for reading my poem. I'm better at writing stories than poetry. But I just had to give it a try. I will fix all that you mentioned :)

Ah! You are a smart plot planner and writer. I noticed that one was more proper than the other because of the cloak thing. Mystery will get you far, I ...

If we lived anywhere close to each other, I would drive to you and give you the biggest hug my weak arms could give. With all your reviews being so ...

You have captured a writer very, very well. GREAT job.

Hello! And thank you so much for reviewing. I have already fixed everything you said as soon as I saw your review (or tried to anyways lol). I apologize for ...

Thank you yet again! You are so kind. No, I have never seen the movie Pan's Labyrinth, but it sounds really cool! In reality, it is nice to find someone ...

Omg! Thank you so much! With the shooting thing, I've heard (and read) that in such situations, adrenaline is pumping and that stops pain from being felt for a small ...

Thanks! Have an awesome day!

Ah! I see. It all makes sense. I will have to go back and read. So far, I am interested.

Thank you! This was already written before I posted it on the site, so I shall work diligently on my quotations and whatnot. Your critiques are very much appreciated.

I am very impressed. Most wouldn't use morning food or tea to describe what it felt like when someone left. Your creativity surpasses mine in the aspect. Whenever I got ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and critique my writing! I have never had anyone really tell me what I need to fix so having someone ...

Thank you so much, MrBrainwasher! I am adding the missing punctuations now.