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Re: Confusion - Prologue.
Ohhh I didn't realize there was a Prologue D: I just read Chapter One ._. Ahhhh, okay! ^-^ this is great! xD lol Firstly, the beginning is GOLDEN. I lovvve ...
May 14, 2013 -
Re: Confusion - Chapter One.
Hi, BlackNether ^-^ First let me say that the amount of time and words put into this is justifiable for some credit x) Anyhoo, secondly, some parts were a bit ...
May 14, 2013 -
Re: The Brave One
Hiya ^-^ This has a really enchanting air to it, and you could make it an excellent piece if you extended it c: just a thought. Since it's an old ...
May 13, 2013 -
Re: The Winds Of Change.
This was really beautiful ^-^ and I thought it was lovely when you mentioned Christ, it was unexpected for me lol Your wording and setting are both top-notch, I wouldn't ...
May 13, 2013 -
Re: What the Night Knows
First I'd like to say that your style is realllllllly admirable and inspiring for me personally (And I don't use those two words lightly lol). Your word choices, the air ...
May 13, 2013 -
Re: choices
Aww, I thought it was super adorable ^-^ The tense in some areas is off, like it says: "Mickey sat on the tall oak tree next to her house and ...
May 13, 2013