CelticaNoir

Name: Renaheid Team (Devas or Harlots): Devas Appearance (Pictures are fine): She has rich, flaming red hair and smoky grayish-green eyes. She is of average build, of light weight and ...

Hey, it's Leza again. ^^ Okay, for starters, the paragraphs aren't clumped together, so that's good. I also noticed that you kept your attention towards meticulous details. Well done. But ...

O_o Well, while everyone's said it for me all, I am going to review, so here it is. I will say this - your knack for detail is something I ...

It's Leza again. ^^ Wow, and I mean it. :P Still jarring every time I look back and forth between the posts to refresh myself, but I guess it can't ...

Haha, I loved it. :P This one takes a different direction from other Twilight spoofs I've seen so far, so well done. Poor, poor Rob. :P Robyn.

Hi, it's Leza. Good job, as usual. I especially liked the split personality twist. ^^ The sudden difference in writing style is a little jarring, but I suppose it couldn't ...

Thanks Lydia! ^^ If I remember correctly, it only took me about an hour or so. Re-coloring's much easier than making a thing out of scratch. If you take a ...

Wow...and I mean it. :P I had to stiffle my laughter so my mum wouldn't wake up. :D Derek's absolutely right, the books don't compare - 'coz Twilight sucks. It ...

The nearest I ever came to a good anime drawing :P I guess I don't practice much...anyways, this is one of the characters in the novel I'm writing. Sorry for ...

A re-coloring of Aura I did while I was bored. ^^ Done with Photoshop CS2. Emotional_Aura.jpg

Hi Durrie, it's Lean again. :P Again, it was well done. The flow of the story is smooth, and there aren't any grammar mistakes as far as I can see. ...

Hi Kyo, it's Leza. ^^ Well done, but I still found it a little heavy on the eyes. You could do with separating the single paragraphs into multiple, shorter paragraphs, ...

I'm definitely interested, so count me in. ^^

The new edit is below...I couldn't bring myself to delete the old one until I had some reviews on the new version... Erithea of the fairest seas How many you ...

I'll give it a line-by-line review. ^^ The men all gathered round to see the show in the street. A single woman danced, streamers waved around, This is supposed to ...