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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: nameless, useless and i collapse into cliche

    this is nice. it is enjoyable, interesting. not capitivating or great but good. i think the ues of "no more" and "wanna" should be changed to "anymore" and 'want to". ...

    Mar 3, 2005


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson