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ChaoticRodent

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: It's You, My Love! (By Jasmine)

    ill admit, im not at all familiar with this series, but from what i can tell, the narratrator is someone who deeply loves their partner. I think that its done ...

    Jul 13
  • Short Story » Other, Supernatural Re: Xavier-Love in decaying hearts

    i think that this is a very good concept for characters, but i do believe that the execution is a little off. It feels vague in some parts, but too ...

    Jul 13
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: “What We Never Said” part 2

    I really enjoyed this poem, and i think it is the perfect reflection on how much fathers are willing to sacrifice for the future of their children. it also displays ...

    Jul 13
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Elisa’s origin: Souls and Roses 🧚🏽‍♀️🌸

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    This story does a really good job of feeling like a fairytale at first before slowly turning into something darker and more emotional. One thing I liked immediately was the ...

    May 27
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: precautions to avoid being drafted

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    This poem stood out to me because it feels extremely personal and emotionally honest. Rather than simply talking about masculinity and femininity in a broad way, the writer makes the ...

    May 27
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Chained

    This was an interesting story. I like how you gave your character a background, showed that he had not always wanted to be an executioner, i also like how you ...

    Mar 30, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deep Space Chapter 2: Journey to the Center of the Universe

    I like this story, its interesting and i love how you write. Firstly, grammatically, your writing is extremely good, from what I could see there were very few mistakes, if ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Shhh...It's a Secret

    This is an interesting story, and i very much like how you wrote it. It sounds like a poem, with a certain flow, almost lyrical. I also like how you ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The creeping, crawling feeling of love

    I love how you express the deep and complex emotions of Edwin, it really helps the reader to empathize with our fellow. I also enjoy the way you relate to ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Through the Poppies

    This is a nice and light short story. I loved your use of imagery throughout the story, it brings a bright and sunny picture to the mind. Your use of ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Game

    This story is an incredibly powerful exploration of self-doubt, isolation, and the psychological effects of feeling trapped in a cycle of failure and rejection. I like your skillful uses of ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: First part

    The opening paragraph expertly draws readers into a chilling, atmospheric world. The detailed imagery of the snowstorm and Korin’s determined, silent movements create a strong sense of tension. You'

    Mar 29, 2025


Here's to the crazy ones. The misfits. The rebels. The troublemakers. The round pegs in the square holes. The ones who see things differently. They're not fond of rules. And they have no respect for the status quo. You can quote them, disagree with them, glorify or vilify them. About the only thing you can't do is ignore them. Because they change things. They push the human race forward. And while some may see them as the crazy ones, we see genius. Because the people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world, are the ones who do.
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