CharlotteGrace

I liked it. A lot. I don't know why you didn't post anything on it yet?

"'Thanks for seating me next to Alexandria' what the hell was that?" I asked. I had turned my back on Charlie. "You didn't actually have to talk at all." "Hey, ...

I liked it a lot. IT was very riveting.

I liked it like all the others.

I like it a lot. You posted it like two years ago but I like it a lot.

I loved it! It was good and I liked how you incorporated German into it.

I liked it a lot. I hope that there is more.

I liked it a lot. Ihope that there is more!

Too much detail for me. For me you have to let the new information and detail sink in before you add some new stuff in it.

Hey I liked it. It's different. Charlotte Grace

I liked it a lot. It shows the actual struggles of an american teen mom and the father not wanting a part of it. It brings out who these people ...

Hey. I loved the story. I just had a little confusion with there being no spaces in between the paragraphs but other than that it was golden. Charlotte

I completely agree with Megsug. The time line is very conflicting. I need it to be clearer than what it is. It just confused me even more.

I liked it.

Not too shabby. I wonder how it will turn out? I've only read this one but I will read the rest. *Charlotte Grace