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Thank you! Yeah I first wrote this in first person.

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Thanks! I was a bit worried about introducing too many characters too.

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I'm dyslexic (I'm pretty sure I have other learning disabilities but I'm not sure) so I add unnecessary words, skip words, or spell words oddly all the time. It's a ...

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thanks! i talked a bit more about Georgiana and Dana in the first chapter and they'll be in chapter 3 too. Margo isn't really friends with them and that's what ...

just posted it today!

Edited those parts and I hope Margo is a bit more likeable. I'll work on adding more internal dialogue but I already touched on the relationship with Georgiana and Dana ...