Checkmate

Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: We're So Blind
Wow, good job! This was a really nice poem with a lot of meaning. Awesome. Yeah... pretty pathetic but I wouldn't change anything except for the double is. Cheers, Checkmate.
Mar 2, 2009
Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Save us by the bell
Very good job. :D
Feb 8, 2009

If all pulled in one direction, the world would keel over.
— Yiddish proverb