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  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Concaptivus - prologue

    I love this! There is only one thing I would change. Maybe in the first paragraph instead of saying bored, try saying "weary", I think it would have a positive ...

    Jul 7, 2013


I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees.
— Pablo Neruda