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In all honesty, the only line I really liked was "Your loyalty was no longer to me." The rest seemed really cliche. However, I do not feel that this is ...

Brad, I didn't have a problem connecting anything together here, and I thought it was probably the most powerful and moving poem you've written. The chaos and confusion others had ...

Oh Brad, this is so heartbreaking! You sound so sad and lonely in the recording, and I just want to reach out and hug you. I know you're not going ...

I'm not really sure I grasped the meaning of this poem, but I do know, I appreciated the language used in this piece greatly. You had my attention from beginning ...

it was kind of scatter brained in the beginning but it improved in the third stanza. i kind of like that feel, but my only problem would be that it's ...

I think "We're all wearing masks" is to cliche to be repeated so many times. Other than that, it wasn't astounding, but fair enough to get by I suppose. Tell ...

It was a little cliche up until "Angels" and from then on, it was a rather enjoyable piece. I could almost do without everything before that line. I also love ...

Concerning the first stanza, I guess it depends on what style of writing appeals to you. I personally am a very much a literal person so the first stanza was ...

You have great imagery, I must say. Rhyming a little off it some places but it's alright. Not sure I can say I'm a huge fan of the title, I ...

The first stanza was great, the second stanza even better. Not a huge fan of the third, but the fourth brought it all full surface. Like Jack said, you definitely ...

In my personal opinion, I thought it was beautiful. It was a little hard for me to catch on in the first few lines because I wasn't sure where you ...

I really enjoyed this. It was very descriptive and insightful. However, I think the fourth stanza was probably your weakest. It didn't seem to fit the calibur of the rest ...

Wow, I love the theme. 'Lovers and Thieves' really rang a bell for me. It was repetitive/consistent enough to be a song, but wasn't at all hasty or overbearing. I ...

Wow, I love the brightness...the provocativeness. It was very stimulating, and I must say the rhythm added to that tremendously. Usually, I am not the greatest fan of the repetition ...

The attitude of this piece seemed to be very short and to the point. Also a little rush, but it sounded great. Not only did I read through it smoothly, ...