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ChildofEden

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Masquerade

    Thank you to you all, your critiques are much appreciated! ~ Eden

    Aug 21, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Adventures of Little Hippo

    Baha Sorry, Butterfly, but Little Hippo is purple, just like my muse.

    Jul 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Snow

    I really love how you put some of these words together! I can't say I understand the hidden meaning, but it was fun to read. Anything I found has already ...

    May 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Memories Before

    I really do like the contrasting images, but I have to agree about the emotion part. I just really couldn't FEEL this one. All in all, great job! ~ Eden

    May 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dawning

    Very picturesque, I like it! The rhythm took a little working out in my head, but I love the way you worded it all! Great job!

    May 12, 2008


May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death.
— An Unknown Bride, Leap Year