ChimeraMania

Rule #1 never make it long Rule #2 never make it short These are the rules I go by when ever I post something. Why? Well is something is too ...

Okay so I only seen like one or two mistakes it mainly had to do with wrong words. Like: ' the young paramedic raided the bruise on her forward with ...

I really do like this it has a feel to it like after the second stanza I was hoping that his father comes. I like how you rhymed is spots ...

Oooo I smell romance. Okay so its a good chapter. Wish is was a little longer but hey get always get what you wished for. But I enjoy how it ...

Hello, one thing I saw was 'she didn't want to lose her precious man who paid for her bills.' 'she didn't want to lose her precious man who paid her ...

OMGOSH....I hate but yet love it all at the same time. Okay Im going to skip to the end. OMGOSH I love the end. She likes him so much and ...

OMG I so hated how it ended but I loved it all the same. What happens next, or does it go back (like a flashback). I love the words you ...

This title caught my eye, so Shar-rae is here with a review or just a random comment. 'are kept in a corner of my heart' don't think you need the ...

'because I amscared of the rejection.' 'because I'm scared of the rejection.' or 'because I am scared of the rejection.' 'ensueif ' 'ensure if' 'I miss you playing my song ...

Hey shoaib, just want to say so understand the title once I started reading. Haunt your forever. Haunt you forever. I like how this stays on one top. Hate that ...

Okay love how you put French in this, because I'm taking a French class at school so I understood almost everything. But my French teacher did say that in the ...

I so hated how they fought. I thought that Jacob would be on his side but now it seems like he was against him the whole time. That's not nice, ...

Sorry for the comment below my friend messed with my computer. 'widened in to a drive way' don't think you need the in 'widened to a drive way' but if ...

Okay so I had reviewed like almost all of these but I lost it so I don't really remember what I had put on there. But I know that I'm ...

Okay so I see that they have magic, but I have a feeling that will be reveled in later chapters. I like what you did with the reason on why ...