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Re: Blink and It's Gone
This poem is very beautiful. It's harsh, but so meaningful and well written. The style is very cool too. It is so interesting, because I feel like the short length ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: blue
Amazing and soooooo sad. This is such an excellent example of great writing. I love how abstract the title is, and the beginning ties to the end so beautifully. I ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: Echoes of Yesterday
Wow! I love this! Very intriguing and well written. This is obviously a poem, but there is a very strong story in it as well. Fills you with satisfaction to ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Break my Heart
This poem is so heartfelt and real. I really like it. The last verse ties it all together so perfectly/beautifully, it makes me smile (though it is supposed to be ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: 25 Things to Keep in Mind When Surviving a Horror Novel
This is SO accurate. It's kinda scary; how many have you read? ;) Anyway, I think you did an awesome job on this. Really. I love number 15: hilarious. And ...
Sep 10, 2015 -
Re: Cat's Meow
Ha! Love this! Since you are asking for suggestions, I think that the 4th verse could use a little work on the flow. Maybe something like: she buys me so ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: See Red, Hear Red, Feel Gray
ok, so you're good at writing. (See what I did there?) Anyway, I really like your poem. It is truly from the heart and I can feel the pain which ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Society
Wow, this is so true and well written! I really like your poem, Biluata! My favorite part is: a perfect robot you shall be. It's so awesome! I also love: ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: blue birth, cold stars
I really like this poem. I love how abstract and heartfelt it is. I would read more. I like that you made the choice to not really finish each line ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Silent but shouting
This is fantastic! Really great job, JoeDeF! It is short, but very meaningful. I really like that the title is said twice in the poem, both times it's really well ...
Aug 18, 2015 -
Re: words to a former best friend
Wow. So much was said in this short-ish poem. It progresses BEAUTIFULLY and you can see how upset this person is, yet they are kind of at peace with it ...
Aug 18, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1
"but he still did appreciate my own sarcasm." Did you mean 'didn't'? just wondering. I really like the description of Roxanne (she had midnight blue eyes, light blonde hair, freckles ...
Aug 18, 2015 -
Re: Protector #1
Wow, Dracula. This is amazing. It is so real, and the relationship between the characters is incredibly sweet. The story is so heavy in the beginning, and I could so ...
Aug 17, 2015