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Re: I think it's time for you to go
Heya, CM! ^^ I loved reading this. It was emotional, made me angry for what he had done and all those other feelings. What questioned me was that, had Rachael ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Diary of the Sluttiest Virgin - Chapter 2
Hiya, Charley! Cookie here again. Hmm. From what I read from the first Chapter to this one, I can really say that, you haven't quite made that impression you made ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: The Diary of the Sluttiest Virgin
Hey, Charley! Cookie here to give you a review. Alright. The title is interesting. It draws you into the story and you can't do anything but read it and find ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: The Captain's Prediction
Hey, Claire! Cookie here to do a review for you just like you requested! ^^ So, great story(or to you, a poem) here. Although, I am quite sure this will ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter One
Hey! I'm back to review Chapter 1. Okay, so WO-AH. That was so cool! Now, I think I know what you meant why people were calling Bella crazy. I think ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken
Hi thewriterinside! Cookie here to give you a review! Okay, first I would like to say, this is a completely different subject to even write on. Not that the patient ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: New Life
Hi, Killyouwithwords! Cookie here to give you a review! I liked how you wrote this. It didn't have those big words that we all try to put in as much ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Bleeding Seconds
Hey there TinyDancer! Cookie here to give you a good review! (: The poem had a lot of feel to it, I can say. It did leave me thinking for ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: The rose red city
Hey Book Worm! This is Cookie reporting here to review for you! I can see that there isn't much conversation made here in this short story. Mainly, its more of ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Trains
Carina! I know I'm a little late to review this but couldn't help it. This will just be a short review. First off, I loved this and as I expected ...
Jul 22, 2013 -
Re: The Past (2) *Revised*
Hello singingwriter1673! I am here to review Part 2! Well, to be frank, I liked Part 1 much better than Part 2. Maybe because Part 1 had more detail to ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Past (1) *Revised*
Hey singingwriter1673! I am eagerly waiting to go read Part 2 now. I liked it, it gave a really professional image to the story and you can totally get the ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Above It All: Epilogue
Hi Smilykid! I absolutely enjoyed reading this work of yours. Not even one bit of this beautiful piece was off limit or a tad boring. It reminds me of my ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Prom
Hey ThothMagic ! I loved your story, it had a good message to it and it didn't have that kind of disgusting romance either so, good job! I thought it ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Fear
Hi! All in all, I liked this poem but you should have made it a full-rhyming poem. Never mind! You have done a good job! ^^ Though there are some ...
Feb 24, 2013