ChocolateCello

'Ello, its Cello, here for a likely short review (seeing as your work is simply fifteen words long ;) ) When it comes to content, there was only one thing ...

'Ello, it's Cello. Let me simply say I completely agree with silverhanded. Anorexia is not something to be taken lightly. I could go on to describe why but they already ...

'Ello, it's cello! For this review, I'd like to focus on your rhyming. (I would like to mention that I'm writing on a phone in a moving car so my ...

'Ello, it's Cello, here to review! Let me start by saying that the thing I noticed most was your lack of commas. There were so many places that commas were ...

'Ello, it's Cello! To be honest, I have not read any of the chapters before this one so it will be hard for me to make notes on character or ...

'Ello, it's Cello! Happy review day! Let's just jump in~ Cold, so cold, Like a Winter's day, Snowflakes in my heart, Forever there to stay. I feel like your first ...

'Ello, it's Cello, the queer police here. I'd like to start out by fully acknowledging that this is a joke and to be honest, I'm all up for queer based ...

'Ello, it's Cello, here to get into some editing of this poem. Let's jump in. Do it, he said I looked away, told him I can't I emptied my glass, ...

Sleep deprived Cello here to review~ I'm not one for introductions. Let's just get to it. I am the marmalade that you so carelessly spread across whichever bread pleases you. ...

'Ello, it's Cello here to review! Happy review day! Usually I focus on many things in a review but I'd rather just talk to you about rhyme scheme and stanzas. ...

'Ello, it's Cello here to review! I'm going to start out in the worst way possible- with a nitpick. Crrrrrrrrr.... An ellipse (the '...') should only ever have three dots. ...

'Ello, it's Cello. Happy review day! Let me start off by saying I completely agree with Sec and their review below. You should incorporate that fact that you're a girl ...

'Ello, it's Cello, here to review! Happy review day! It's a few days late but welcome to YWS! I hope you've been enjoying the site! I actually really enjoyed this ...

'Ello, it's Cello here for a review! Happy review day! I'm just going to jump right in. (It's been awhile since I've seen an acrostic poem so hopefully this will ...

'Ello, it's Cello here to review! Let me start by saying welcome! I hope you enjoy your time here at YWS! Because it works best for me, I'm going to ...