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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Time has Overtaken Us

    First of all I really liked it. I love the whole concept of your poem and how you worked it in. I think you slipped up a few places in ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Picture Of Life

    Sometimes I wish life Would slow down To a snail's pace. Stop. Go back. To relive moments Of pure happiness, Joy, Belonging. Moments of feeling I actually fit Into the ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: The adventures of the geek.

    Wow I really like your poem, especially the ending. The rhyming is off in a few in a few places but it's not very bad. I really like how you ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: It

    Well overall I really like your poem. At the begininng the rhyming starts off very well and it flows very nicely. The rhymes fit in well with the way you ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Old Friend

    Overall I thought the poem flowed very well. I really like how you worded it in the end. I would just like to say that at the very beginning it ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Empty

    I'm not moving forward I'm not moving back I'm stuck right here Emotions I do lack This world is empty There's nothing here No reason to be afraid No reason ...

    May 21, 2009


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy