ChristataAstera

Yes, good job! :)

Thank you for the feedback! (I meant that the plants were moving by themselves) :D

You're very welcome! Yes, I think that could work. I'm not asking for much, just a teeny bit of exposition, like a 'oh no my mom is gonna be furious ...

Thank you! :3

Thanks a bunch for the feedback! I might use this as a quick prologue for a much longer story, so your review is extremely helpful. :)

thanks~ :) My normal writing is way less descriptive than this story, so no worries there.

oh my goodness, thank you so much! :)

This is fantastic. I can't find anything wrong with it. Literally. I love the concept, the imagery, the characters, everything. Just...wow. I would read a book based on this. Good ...

I think it happens right when Heimdall leaves, and Forseti going after Loki. It just felt weird, I dunno. Maybe it's just me lol.

Thanks for the feedback! :)

Thank youuu~ :3

Thanks for the wonderful review!

Thank you so much! :) Iambic Pentameter is really cool, but I've tried it before, and trust me, nobody wants to see that. I'll try fixing up the grammar stuff.

Thanks for the feedback! I tried putting this into stanzas as it was originally, but for some reason it didn't work. I'll try working on my rhymes since they're kinda ...

Thanks for the review :) I personally thought she probably just figured out the angel thing by herself, but I can see where it would get confusing and such. Thanks ...