Christina

Hello, I think this is really good and a great idea. If you were to break it up a little in to paragraphs it would look neater and would be ...

Hello, This is beautiful. I can imagine it so clearly. You have described everything really well. I love reading about fairies so I was so happy to read this. It ...

Hello, I really like this. You have done really well with describing everything. I also like how mysterious it all is. That makes me interested and leaves me wanting to ...

Hello. I think this could be a great story. I really like the character you have created. I love that Anastasia is rebellious and doesn't act like the average princess. ...

Thank you for writing this. I think as a whole you have described depression extremely well. I love when you wrote that 'it's like you're drowning' as it is so ...

I really enjoyed reading this. You have written it so it is so clear to picture. It's really detailed and you have described their relationship really well. I love how ...