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ChristineLefevre

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To Make the Earth Smile

    Hello dear, I saw you had no reviews and I simply adore being the first reviewer so here goes! So I read your poem twice. The first time I finished ...

    Dec 18, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Mother of the Savior: A Monologue

    Wowzers Princess! Two nit picks really quick! 1. "This time I was walking down an empty street in city I'd never seen before." I think you meant "in a city" ...

    Dec 18, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Without Words Screenplay

    Hello MadHatter! I absolutely love screenplays! I work on my own all the time but had never thought of a no words one, that's a really cool prompt to work ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: An Almost Lover

    Hey Joanne, I hate to be the meanie but I had a problem with this peice. It felt a litte confusing at first, the more I read the more I ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Mr. Darcy

    Hellooooo Luna! How are you? I read your poem and I like it. There weren't any gramatical errors I caught off gaurd. The parts that don't seem to work for ...

    Dec 17, 2010


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