Chryssa2305

Hi there : ) aw!! That was very sad! Tears welled up XD It was amazingly written, though. I didn't find any typos or grammatical errors. Go you for proofreading ...

Hello there! : D This was a nice piece, I think. It felt very rushed at the end, though, as you thought. It was like there was information and details ...

Hello, : ) I really enjoyed the first line. That made me go, "Wait, what? What'd you do?" Then I had to stick around until I figured the story out, ...

Yay! Awesome, you guys. ^_^ I think I'm going to sleep as much as I can on Oct. 31 and then the SECOND Nov 1st rolls around, I'm going to ...

That was cute. I mean, considering all you could use was dialogue. Because it was only dialogue, though, you need to make it more understandable so that the reader knows ...

You know you're a writer when... ...you will write on every available scrap of paper/skin/surface when you come up with an amazing idea. ...your math teacher gives you extra math ...

I'd have to nitpick is that fish don't actually breathe water, though :P Their gills filter the oxygen out of the water. So they do technically breathe air! They just ...

Just a quicky- I know what Special Education is. My mother is a Special Education teacher for the middle school in our area. I meant that the MC is getting ...

:3 Thanks for all the reviews guys! Like I said, this was just a draft. So, I"m going to take your advice to heart and fix it up a lot, ...

This is a short bit from a suggestion from Perdido(or...technically the Pixies?). It's a draft, just wanted to post it cause I wrote it in 10 min and was (slightly) ...

So, anyone ready? Interested? Planning? I've been planning for this years since I failed at last years XDD :3 Too bad we can't share yet o_o''

Hello, Chryssa here :) First: I LOVE your avatar! And I enjoyed the story as a whole, it was sad that she died, but it was a good piece. I ...

Hi hi : ) I liked this, it was adorable! The title is what made me stop and think, 'oh! It's gonna be good!" I actually liked that there was ...

A/N: Partically true story. Written in despration ______ I stand on the edge. It's such a long way down. I can feel the wind caressing my face, running it's ringers ...

Hello, I enjoyed this piece. It has a nice opening and, as Lindabelle does, I enjoyed the line, "the legend "Mr. Happy", but owned by a man with a face ...