Citrus17

You're most welcome!

Yes! That is exactly the reaction i was looking for! I wanted to add some humorous bits in to balance the seriousness and the thrill. The next chapter is coming ...

Wow, that means so much to me! I edited this chapter last night so to hear such an amazing review afterwards is amazing. Thank you so much!

That means so much! The next chapter is coming tonight :)

Wow, thank you so much! The next chapter is coming tonight!

Aww, well I like your writing. It's true and honest.

Aww, I really appreciate that, thank you so much!

Beautiful rhythm and such absorbing lines. Your writing is smooth and flow is so consistent. A lovely poem that conveys so much emotion and hooks the reader brilliantly. Can't wait ...

Aww x well I loved it x

I did, it's beautiful

You're so welcome!

Aww, thank you xxx

Aww, your words mean so much! Thank you so much for commenting!

Thank you it means a lot!

Thank you!