Claeren

Hi Caroline! I'm Claeren, but you can call me Claery (it sounds like this: Clare-y. See?) Pop already gave you a good set of rules, so I don't have to, ...

Nice work! I like the originality of this poem, it really is one of a kind, even if the message is a bit dark. I have to agree that the ...

Awesome poem, it really has a dramatic flare and sense of reality to it. Oh and Music Lover? I tend to do that too, so your not alone. ^^, *laughs ...

Hahahaha! That was hilarious! I hear my mom say stuff like this all the time! I hear it sooo much that I could become a wife right now if I ...

Wow...that's like...wow...I'm speechless! How do you do it?! Amazing! X) A few things though: Rhyming/Rhythm: It was a bit off in places, which kinda threw me off, such as in ...

I don't know where you plan to set this - what century, I mean. Because, even though it has the whole 'forced-marriage-ladies-in-waiting-nobility-kings etcetc,' the dialogue and narration reminds me o

Tis the reason of the season For tis the season of reason. Thus the reason is to have a season of: F U N ! ! ! Yeah! Summer is ...

:smt024 Hey, MonsieurRosseau! (Can I just call you Ross?) It's nice meeting you! ^^ I'm Claeren, and I hope to get to know you very well! :smt083 ==> :smt077 Thought ...

:smt024 Hey, Matt! It's nice meeting you! ^^ I'm Claeren, and I hope to get to know you well! :smt083 ==> :smt077 Thought I'd give you a little help by ...

That was kind of how it was suppose to look. Also you're probably right when you say it's short. It has to be 500 words...*cries like a baby* *Stomps off ...

Welcome to the YWS Academy, Jazz! (I CAN call you that, right?)^^ By the way, I'm Claeren, a.k.a Snow White, but you can just call me Gen. Either that or ...

Welcome to the YWS Academy, Katrina! I hope you enjoy your stay while you create magic and review magic here! ^^ By the way, I'm Claeren, a.k.a Snow White, but ...

Hey, what's up Ariana? Welcome to YWS or Young Writer's Society! I'm Claeren, or Snow White, or whatever you want to call me. My name is Genevieve Noling, but please, ...

I really like this. I mean, I really like this. =) There are a few problems though. Spelling/Grammar - There are a few instances where you misspelled something or got ...

This is quite something. I like how you portrayed everything, it really made it feel real to me. Also, I like how you create a sort of haunting feeling about ...