Clickduncake

Hey Satira! Clickdun here :3 Let's talk about your story... I know I'm not supposed to nipick, but it's just one thing. And it annoys me so much I want ...

Hello Widdershins! Clickdun here :3 Let's talk about your story... Let's get the nitpicks out of the way: He probably has, thought Jay. Thoughts traditionally go in italics. He probably ...

Hey Chrissy! Clickdun here :3 Let's talk about your story... Lesh get the nipicks out of the way. nusense Nuisance is spelled wrong, try "N-u-i-s-a-n-c-e" that should do it. were ...

Hey Sarah! Jumpy here :3 “My mother left after I became trapped, and I have never known my father.” Okay, to start off with, this is really clunky. When it ...

Hey Godlypopo! Clickdun here :3 So, you note that this is supposed to be confusing, which is kind of irritating. I can't think of much to say here. Critiques escape ...

Hey spaulds! Clickdun here :3 So, I liked this story. It was quick and easy, and a fun read. I do have a bit of a complaint though. "Solve this ...