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Leja -- I wanted to comment on one thing or another, but I love it all.

I'm hugging your last poem right now. Really.

waiting for my skin to start talking. This silent conversation is where we collect, connect those parts of ourselves not visible in the day, and reminds me why we speak ...

Playground makes me happy, because the imagery reminds me of my old elementary school playground, and what my one friend and I used to do. :) So nice.

Hannah-twin, I really love reading your poetry. It's so frank and sweet and real. I really, really just loved "I should have left my number" (if I got the title ...

Aw, I really enjoy that poem, Kalli! You should post more!

it has different formatting, but Yewis won't let me show it. So. 4.5. upon the viewing of some photographs the pretty eggplant body sits on thin & towering legs, hair ...

Dem, I've never read any of your poems before! But I absolutely love the mirror. Almost seems like it could be turned into a song. :)

I had it.

I absolutely love "Addiction"

I tried rhyming today. I usually don't rhyme. I'll go back to being obscene tomorrow. 4.4. I rhymed and the world tidied up Let’s all just stop feeling, let’s be ...

I definitely enjoy the last poem the best, the imagery is chilling and pleasant! I don't always enjoy rhyming that is so obvious, and I like it in the first ...

I really enjoy the way you do the lines and the rhyme scheme in your first poem, June! march across the canvas; and orange-friendship-sworls I question this though. XD And ...

You should finish the last one, Kit-Kat!

Oh, your last poem is so darling and upsetting. :cry: These are amazing, Kitty!