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Re: My bff.......
This is really sad! ;( Thanks for sharing your story! :) I think this story was really nice but the only thing I can pick at is basic grammar- capitalisation, ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: The Color Grey
Wow! This is really great. I love the allusion to Queen Sheba! You have loads of literary techniques so I can't fault you there! :) Maybe what you could do ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: Gold and Silver
I really like this poem and I think it is pretty well written. :) I really like the way you split up the colours! It was an interesting and uniques ...
Apr 23, 2016 -
Re: ......
WOW. This is really great that you are expressing your opinions and staying true to what you believe in. This is a good concept but if you were to re ...
Apr 23, 2016 -
Re: Wind
Really loving this poem! The description is pretty good and I like the variation in sentence length. (If it is all to long or short is gets boring and doesn't ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: White Wolf
On a whole I really like this poem! :) The description of the wolf is very well written and I really like the detail and use of imagery. Maybe their ...
Apr 22, 2016