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Thanks Colleen but i think we have very different taste in poems.I'm not into structure or listing from a book rhyme schemes when writing a poem. I simply write and ...

Yeah i usually skip over puntuation and capatilizing bad

no problem but you will notice that i said "as the forest so twisted and dark seemed to pose the perfect home" meaning while i was in the forest i ...

thanks for your opinion :-) and yeah some may need more work ill consider it but as for making metaphores obvious, no way i feel even when reading other poems ...

also "the living dont mix with the dead must be a screw lose in the head" is metaphorical for the people that excel and the people left behind is a ...

"Why dont you let me fill my cup" meaning let me drink whatever i want whenever i want...and the line that folows "i need to hang my brain up tonight" ...

the forest is symbolic of a bad state of mind and the line saying "as the forest seemed to pose the perfect home" meaning how we can get caught up ...