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What I'll do is sit back one day and edit it on Word(tm) and send it to you as a pm, because I can't be arsed to figure out how ...

Legend! That was funny ^_^ I liked his stubborness physically[i/i] evident and her stubborness [i]vocally . With his strong attitude and her strong-minded persona, it looks like this kind of ...

Hahahahahahahahahah classic! You're properly advertising YWS!!! >.< :P I love that- that was brilliant! Good grief why did the ass have to start picking on her? Oh no....lemme think. As ...

Whenever someone annoys me, a simple “go away” paired with my signature icy glare, would be sufficient to send him or her scampering off. -cut the comma after 'glare' because ...

It's pretty good, pretty good. It's cool to see a boy's point of view, and it does seem very English, as I am too :) Conversations are natural and are ...

Very descriptive, moving and comes from somewhere honest, I can tell. Most things that are an almost-direct transcript of our past experiences write more emtionally, and it definetely shows. I ...

This is most excellent! It's original with the refreshing attitudes of the characters- they're not the likeable types, which makes you like them because the main character has a certain ...

That is deep and amazing. I felt the misery of the character, and I don't really see any errors. I could imagine the distance between the characters, and unfortunately these ...

I know what you mean! >.< My art teacher gave me an art book with 20th century atwork n shit, bloomin' hell I found the work rubbish! I love Italian-type ...

I really loved this. I thought it was going to be some break up story but it's soooo much better than what I had expected! The grammer, puntuation, errors etc. ...

That was amazing. I loved the flashback and you got the innocence of Becca as a ten-year old. Just look over it and change stuff like "painted" to "painting" when ...

Wow, what a great end. I like how that tied it up, Bradley now becoming a real centre piece of the epilogue. The ending conversation was good too, as it ...

Hahahahahahahaahaha I loved this!! This is so jokes, I loved the end bit, gosh I love Miserella, she's such a fiesty bitch! >.< Wickid! Oh my lardy if you did ...

That was awesome. My heart's still racing lolz! The mistakes n shiz have been pointed out, but wow it leaves me with a lot of questions, which is pretty sick ...

Well, I would be pissed off too, if that happened to me! Anyway, it was a fantastic chapter! Wonderful! Marvellous! I've been waiting for two days for this CHA MUN ...