Coffee_and_Karma

Hola! Wow, I really liked this. I really felt all the emotion in it. Anyway, for the review: Alright, Syd, I think, Just pee. It’s easy. And it’ll be negative. ...

Hi, uh... Honey? Can I call you Honey? Okay, well I will. This was a sweet little romance story. There are some nitpicks, though. Like Embee said, the first paragraph ...

I love this song! Anyway, I agree with the others that Chelsea's holy experience was unconvincing. It just kind of jumped out of nowhere. Also, I understand that you're probably ...

Hi, Isha. I'm Karma. This was a really sad and touching piece. I loved it. A few nitpicks first: The others all stared at me, two guys and three girls. ...

Hi, just stopping in for a quick review! This is a really interesting idea! Was there any specific reason for writing it? Anyway, some pointers. Playing the guitar to his ...

Oh boy. Oh boy. I'm not gonna lie... This is problematic. This needs help. This needs the services of... The Rambo Reviewer! :smt068 :smt072 (Why yes, that is him fighting ...

Hi again. You were fast posting another part, I like that. :) Anyway, onwards to the review ---> -That was some beautiful description during the dream! The "I love you's" ...

Hey, this was great! I really loved the writing, and it had some beautiful writing. I'd love to read more. A couple problems--> "...we can still be friends," a pathetic ...

Hi, Forestqueen, I'm Karma, and I shall be reviewing this today. I really liked this. It had beautiful writing, and all the characters were really well fleshed out and realistic. ...

Hi, I'm Karma, and I'll be reviewing this today! There were a lot of little grammar mistakes so I'm going to quote the whole story and make my comments in ...

So I don't post a lot of my stuff on YWS, but I feel like there's something a little off about this that I can't place, so I want to ...

Alright. This is awesome . Yeah, I don't know what to say except I really liked it. I liked the mix of first and second person, and the end line ...

Hey, I'm Karma. This was a very good piece, and I thought you had vivid descriptions. I loved it, and can't wait for more. There was one problem here: Without ...

Hey Ecrivain! I'm Karma, and I'll be you're reviewer today. First, you should probably get a rating on this. It might attract more readers if they know what they're getting ...

Hi Inkwell. I'm Karma. This story was... well, actually, it was amazing. I loved it so much. The beginning confused me of course, but everything cleared up by the end. ...