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Re: Shattered Reflection
Hey!! jay here with a review First i would say is my favorite that i really loved ad enjoyed were this part A girl with a wide-set sallow face and ...
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Re: The princess with cancer.
Heya! jay here to give you a review so... First it was nice that you used Rapunzel name in the poem but it was sad through when she died i ...
Oct 13, 2021 -
Re: Dear mermaid on the Starbucks logo
hi i i'm here to drop a review off on what i read First i had to get a laugh out on for reading this when you said I wonder ...
Oct 13, 2021 -
Re: My Body is Not Poetry
heyy! i i'm here to drop an review First this was a pretty good piece of poem this poem really stands out so much and yeah nobody body is not ...
Oct 13, 2021 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
hi i im here to drop a review First i remember Romeo and Juliet it use to be an act play for everyone i i'm like is Romeo and Juliet ...
Oct 13, 2021 -
Re: Poem "Existence"
hi!! here to drop an review i would say about this is to me it was short for everyone to read and poems suppose to be like 5 to 4 ...
Oct 13, 2021 -
Re: Denise-The origin story-Cold hearted survivor
heyy there!! jay here to drop off a review First short storys is fun to read and its nothing but some reading for you to do so we going to ...
Oct 13, 2021 -
Re: (Tea candle)
Hey!! @StringBeam here's a little quick review So here we go First i would say is this was a beautiful piece of new poem you got you did a amazing ...
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Re: Fairy Tales
Heyy!! jay here here goes a quick short review First i would wanna say is y'all your work be like to the top like it means impressive work and i ...
Oct 12, 2021 -
Re: Imposter
Heyyy!! Jay here to drop an review So we going to get started First i could say is i was laughing so hard at this cause what i was thinking ...
Oct 12, 2021 -
Re: The Witch Who Wrote
Heyyy!! jay here with a review!! So lets get started!! First i would say is that this was a pretty good piece right here and what i i'm seeing is ...
Oct 12, 2021 -
Re: Scars
hey @LizzyTyler here is a quick review so we going to get started on your poem! First this poem called Scars was actually impressive this was a awesome poem i ...
Oct 12, 2021 -
Re: Thirteen
Hii! @FireEyes here's a quick review so here we go First i could of said in your poem is @FireEyes you did absolutely a good job being a good author ...
Oct 12, 2021 -
Re: It Hurts to Love a Martyr
hi @IMk i im here to give you a Incoming review since i haven't reviewed in a week So we going to get started First this is what i have ...
Oct 12, 2021 -
Re: A Cringey Cloud of Tears | First Piece's First Lines
hi Andrew nice to see you and your new collabs and poem So i im going to get started First of y'all i im glad that everyone helped you Andrew ...
Oct 8, 2021
