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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Horror Re: Shattered Reflection

    Hey!! jay here with a review First i would say is my favorite that i really loved ad enjoyed were this part A girl with a wide-set sallow face and ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: The princess with cancer.

    Heya! jay here to give you a review so... First it was nice that you used Rapunzel name in the poem but it was sad through when she died i ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: Dear mermaid on the Starbucks logo

    hi i i'm here to drop a review off on what i read First i had to get a laugh out on for reading this when you said I wonder ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Body is Not Poetry

    heyy! i i'm here to drop an review First this was a pretty good piece of poem this poem really stands out so much and yeah nobody body is not ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Other » General, General Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    hi i im here to drop a review First i remember Romeo and Juliet it use to be an act play for everyone i i'm like is Romeo and Juliet ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Poem "Existence"

    hi!! here to drop an review i would say about this is to me it was short for everyone to read and poems suppose to be like 5 to 4 ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Denise-The origin story-Cold hearted survivor

    heyy there!! jay here to drop off a review First short storys is fun to read and its nothing but some reading for you to do so we going to ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: (Tea candle)

    Hey!! @StringBeam here's a little quick review So here we go First i would say is this was a beautiful piece of new poem you got you did a amazing ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Fairy Tales

    Heyy!! jay here here goes a quick short review First i would wanna say is y'all your work be like to the top like it means impressive work and i ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Imposter

    Heyyy!! Jay here to drop an review So we going to get started First i could say is i was laughing so hard at this cause what i was thinking ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Witch Who Wrote

    Heyyy!! jay here with a review!! So lets get started!! First i would say is that this was a pretty good piece right here and what i i'm seeing is ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Scars

    hey @LizzyTyler here is a quick review so we going to get started on your poem! First this poem called Scars was actually impressive this was a awesome poem i ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Thirteen

    Hii! @FireEyes here's a quick review so here we go First i could of said in your poem is @FireEyes you did absolutely a good job being a good author ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: It Hurts to Love a Martyr

    hi @IMk i im here to give you a Incoming review since i haven't reviewed in a week So we going to get started First this is what i have ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Literature Re: A Cringey Cloud of Tears | First Piece's First Lines

    hi Andrew nice to see you and your new collabs and poem So i im going to get started First of y'all i im glad that everyone helped you Andrew ...

    Oct 8, 2021


The human heart has hidden treasures, in secret kept, in silence sealed...
— Charlotte Bronte