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Hey, I found this a pleasantly simple story, but the simple words that satira pointed out kinda give this story a almost dull feeling. However if that's what you were ...

Hey, Nice job on the story! You did a great job and I can tell you put a lot of work into writing this. I wish it hadn't been sitting ...

Hey, I enjoyed reading this, I've said this before on other works I've reviewed but I adore finding nice little story's/chapters to pass the time in fifth period so thanks ...

Hey, Nice story, wish it wasn't in the green room so long tho, its sad. I noticed what you said in the description and I disagree this is a really ...

Hey, Well this was a long one, of course I'm not terribly surprised it seems that the longer the story the more time it spends in the green room. Honestly ...

Hey, Nice story, I love Pokemon so finding a well written story about it is always awesome. In my opinion you did a especially nice job with the Pokemon in ...

Hey, I've been kinda following this story, so I'm gonna start with a general overview of the entire thing. It's been a wonder to watch this story grow, I think ...

Hey, Nice story, it was really fun to read. Not just because I'm bored in school at the moment, I promise. JazzyDracula did a nice job on the nitpicks so ...

Hey, This is a really fun story, I think you did a great job with it. Of course there is always room for improvement in any story. The first thing ...

Hey, This is a nice little short poem and it was easy to read, however I do have a few nitpicks. So let's start with those and go from there. ...

Hey, This has been an interesting story so far, I think adding this aspect was a nice touch. I've enjoyed watching this story come to life. Now, onto my small ...

Hey, It's been awhile sense I reviewed some poetry so bear with me here. I thought this was a very well written poem. I don't have very many complaints. In ...

Hey, Ok just to start off, I was so excited to read this story! I love cross over fanfic especailly when it involves any of my many OTPs! I enjoyed ...

Hey, So right off the bat I can tell you have a lot of potential. But this story needs some work. One of my biggest issues is the absurd amount ...

Hey, This was a pleasure to read, just like most of your work so far has been. I really enjoyed the plot and how you executed it. Admittedly it leaves ...