Collision

Wow. That's all I have to say. I loved the feeling of the words on my mouth and the sounds mixing together, and I loed the poem as a whole. ...

Truly, truly loved this. Thankyou for writing it.

Thanks for your ideas, I'll definitely try and make it clearer. It's not supposed to be about the tree; really it's more about the little girl, but I guess it ...

This would make an awesome end to a poem. I'd love to see what you could come up with in a poem based on this theme.