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I apologize..I don't know why my comment posted twice haha >

I think this is cute! I like the whole concept with the father's broken watch and keeping time with the clock tower. This reminds me of an activity my class ...

I read an amazing book and the main character was a Wiccan. I think that's pretty neat! Good luck with your group! :)

Thank you guys! I made a few changes that were pointed out. Your reviews helped!

Thanks guys! Again, finally made the changes :)

Thanks guys :) I finally got around to making those quick changes to make it better. Thank you so much!

Great job! I like the description and the imagery. I got a little lost on some parts in regards to what you were trying to describe or what type of ...

Wow, that's all I can say. Wow. Really emotional, really deep, really touching. It's hard to find subjects as serious as this. It was the perfect amount to get the ...

Huh this is very interesting! I like how it's different from other stories I've read. The fact that the doctor dies leaves plenty of mystery to what the baby did ...

I like this! I enjoyed the concept and the message. Sounds like it could actually be made into a song if you word it right and have a smooth rhyme ...

Thanks so much :) Every small bit helps :)

Thanks guys. It's extremely apparent that I'm not a poet..usually I post in the short story portion of the website. Thanks for the criticism anyway! If I someday write another, ...

I really enjoyed this! The icicles part was clever. I especially loved the "..toes, sneaking through my socks." I like the message too, saying "you can't know I'm ordinary." Great ...

Wow thanks Lily! :)

Yeah it's really not that great. I actually wrote it for school quite a while ago but I felt like publishing it to see what other people think. Thanks tho!