ConfusingSillyLittleGirl

I like it, I like the rhyme and I like the the fact that is isn't that spesific, that way the reader can make up his or her own answers ...

So beautiful yet so sad, I liked the flow and the rythm, I also think you should carry on with poetry, its obvious that you have a very big talent ...

Heya thanks for your crits guys! Oh yeah and 200397 I understand what you are saying and I also did realise the stanzas were getting bigger when I wrote them ...

Yeah, thanks :) I have been told a few times I repeat too much, I should really try and fix it hehe. Do remember that I wrote this a whole ...

Hey, thanks so much guys! I read your reveiws and I understand what you are saying, thanks again, I'll go work on it :))

Thank you for the reveiws guys! Yeah I make tons of silly mistakes, I'm going to work on that, but thanks, it helps me a lot :)

Haha yeah what did you do, joke, thanks, I never really was good in rythm, but I'm going to try and improve it.