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Re: My first post ever! Poems.
very good nice use of metaphors cant think of anything else so keep up the good work your friend Conor
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: the vampire
nice poem te but the only problem is that the vampire is now too much like a streotype he has no life he has no felling that sort of thing ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Just die
nice this is my sort of poem reminds me of sometihng thati just cant put my finger on Tad bit odd but i liked keep up the good work Conor
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Blood Money for Apple
i really like this poem it is very intersting and there is a good choice of words this poem has its own voice so it stands out Conor
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Gorgon
Very good, bit confused with some of your choises of wording but really very good
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: The Pac-Man Machine
good writing (besides grammar lol) very good idea lol pac man
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: The blue crystal (A story of a princess) (old Version)
BORING not my kind of story *JOKE* it is cioolieo i like it much. YOUR local madman JABBA THE HUTT! Laters P>S i like points so please donate me some ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Chicken Wars
Thank u 4 moving safe!
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Draconian
yes i agree i didnt 100% understand all of it but still...>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> it's a very nice story!
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Chicken Wars
why do you lie about your age Kain1234
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: Chicken Wars
havent had time to edit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! meow
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: suicide bridge.
i was trying 2 be serious but i couldnt think of anything.
Mar 29, 2007 -
Re: Souls
Bravo very good keep up the good work and try 2 write a poem, check through it for grammar your best friend Conor Cant wait to read your next poem!
Mar 29, 2007 -
Re: The Magic Box- Episode I
coolieo
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Recycled Sand
good poem it is rather long from your sort of friend CONORR
Mar 27, 2007