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Hello! Okay this piece needs a bit of work. Some of the parts were great, I will agree with the others who posted before me! However, yes I understand that ...

Hey there! Okay first off my first thought was wow! I didnt know where you were going with the plot, however you ended it with a bang! Wow, I'm still ...

Hey! :) I really enjoyed reading this piece. I'm interested to know who they are running from. I really enjoyed how you described everything well and in detail! My favorite ...