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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bulimia.

    Amazing, reminds me of my freshman year. It's almost hard to understand, kind of. There is so many metaphores people could aquire from this poem, I think that's good. I ...

    May 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Magic and Mischief (Prologue)

    Way to much description, and your story is a bit confusing. I understand that it is a prologue, but you need to make it a little more interesting. I bet ...

    May 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chalk to the Sidewalk

    I really liked the poem. I read ALOT of poems and this was one of my favorites, mainly because it reminds me of myself. I try so hard to erase ...

    Jul 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Shadows : Chapter 1

    I really liked it. But you used ALOT of discriptive words. I have read tons of books, and I noticed that the more popular books don't have alot of descriptive ...

    Jul 28, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Truth About Queens

    That's kind of funny. You do have a point though, no one tries to look at it from the evil queens perspective. Adults try to teach childeren right and wrong, ...

    Jul 28, 2008


i am neither a loose leaf nor do i like loose leafs. really, i am a piece of wide-ruled looseleaf paper.
— looseleaf