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Re: A complete man with a broken heart
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: Space in Between My Thoughts
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: My Cheesecake Addiction
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...
Jan 19, 2018 -
Re: Pretty/Broken
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...
Jan 18, 2018 -
Re: Are you really my brother, brother?
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: Stop it and I’ll sue ya!
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything 1 say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend u I apologize in advance.(I will try ...
Dec 24, 2017 -
Re: April
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...
Dec 24, 2017 -
Re: the language of memory
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (I'm jut pointing out a few things that I find that are in a wrong order or grammar mistakes. I've become the comma ...
Dec 23, 2017 -
Re: Behold the Rocketeer
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! This is really good. I can't find any grammar mistakes, and your commas are in check. Never mind on the last one I ...
Dec 23, 2017 -
Re: God's Only Innocent Children
Hey CorruptedArrow her with a review! I'm not sure where you went with this but I'll give my best go at it! "The smoke makes our eyes water. Look into ...
Dec 23, 2017 -
Re: Not Damn Say
Hey CorruptedArrow here with a review! I also think about these types of things as well. This can hit home for people(Me) or it can hit a wall. You make ...
Dec 23, 2017 -
Re: del
Hey CorruptedArrow here with a review! I am a victim to bullying, I know where this comes from. I agree if someone is being bullied, talk to someone. For the ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: f
Hey CorruptedArrow here for a hopefully short review! You have made a good start here if you wanted to keep going, but you may have a different field of view. ...
Dec 11, 2017 -
Re: Just an NPC
Hey, CorruptedArrow here! I just want to say that if this applies to you IRL you aren't alone in the Game of Life. Anyways back to the story you have ...
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: Control
Hey CorruptedArrow here! You have a good start, to your poem. "Stay in control, Don't listen to your head, You know it just wants you to be dead." There is ...
Dec 7, 2017