CottonCandyCliches

Hey, giving this a look while I wait for you to consider continuing the other project (the one with Maria and Michael). I actually found this moving too fast. I ...

Not really much constructive criticism here. Your writing is wonderful, very concise and straight-to-the-point, yet not too simple. It has the right balance of detail and suspense, and goddammit I ...

This was a nice piece, well-written and portrayed the lady's emotions pretty well. A few of the sentences felt odd to me, particularly the second paragraph. I think you should ...

Hey there. Your piece is very well-written; free of grammatical and spelling errors for the most part, and those that I did spot have already been pointed out by other ...