- Re: full of phantoms Apr 13, 2023
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Re: This is how you start a poem
your imagery was wonderful and I can't wait to read more
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Re: she's just a picture
these are amazing and the imagery really has me, I liked the two ships in the night and if you rewrite it I would love to see it
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Re: and as for the bucket
these are amazing but the last two are my favorite i love how they have a sense of melancholy but also seem to appeal to dark humor.
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Re: My life in many words
doss amazing poetry i really likes the lines 'Clouds are like my heart/ empty and broken' you are doing great and really pushing yourself keep it up
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Re: Making friends with broken mirrors
quilly you have such an impressive thread and your poems carry so much meaning
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Re: love letters to a coffee cup
this pearl rimmed goblet of mud ceramic and solid cracks against my teeth pressing in so hard i think they will sink up into my gums like white enamel splinters ...
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Re: love letters to a coffee cup
in a temple on a hillside full of sunlight creaks a door-- a hidden door the people on the inside try to find it they feel trapped in darkness--- despite ...
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Re: love letters to a coffee cup
the sticky old coffee on the counter of my mindscape tries to break down and define things in the most rudimentrary way the most unpleasant awful tearstains left behind by ...
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Re: full of phantoms
-------------------------------- that feeling like a spiderweb drifting across my cheeks as the blush raises on my face invisible as it is with my anemia as i see the corners of ...
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Re: full of phantoms
------------------------ they say when you are in love you know its only partially true because when you are in love you know that his favorite color is bright orange and ...
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Re: full of phantoms
[image coming... okay maybe not so soon] we both know this isnt about a cup you are an old coffee mug with a chip on it's rim with a worn ...
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Re: Gem is Moldy
Hello [Name], hope you are having a nice day! I am Gem, a Junior Moderator here on YWS. I am contacting you to let you know that I deleted the ...
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Re: full of phantoms
[picture coming soon] a cashier at the dollarstore yesterday she forgot how to count when i tried to buy two mean beans i was short a dollar which my aunt ...
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Re: full of phantoms
[picture coming soon] my mirror looks at me with rounded features and all the expressions of a hallmark beauty you know somewhere in my lineage im related to marilyn monroe ...
Apr 4, 2023
