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Re: The Hissing Scarf
It would work better if he were dreaming. So thats my suggestion.
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: The Hissing Scarf
I am slightly confused, is Lizzie a hallucination from what he is smoking? A deceased family member? A dead girlfriend? Is the snake thing related to something that happened to ...
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: ????????
Thank you this is supposed to introduce the charactors and plot in my upcoming stories further more it got posted before it was ready by my clumsy fumbling with the ...
Dec 7, 2017 -
Re: if the dead man could speak to me
no thank you !
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: Summoning Persephone (750 words)
same
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: h
wow.......that was intense, and moving. i am stunned and speechless. that ...... was ........a ......very ....... amazing.......poem.
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: if the dead man could speak to me
that was amazing! it was captivating. i just, wow! i am completely speechless....WOW.
Dec 5, 2017