CowLogic

I don't understand how there can be an individual who has truly embraced solipsism, when I am the only individual who truly exists. Explain this crap.

Nice!

Thanks!

First, try to make larger changes for your next draft (i.e. plot changes, whatever you want to add). Then take a look at how you're organizing things and look to ...

Nice start. Try to work on cleaning this up and adding more literary elements.

10/10 would kiss.

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I tried to read this story, but I couldn't keep from fantasizing about sizzling burgers on a grill.

I wasn't claiming that was what you meant, I'm merely giving you some personal advice I feel would be in your best interest as far as healthiness is concerned. Just ...

You can still be a nerd and maintain physical fitness. In fact, it's very important that you do remain fit so that you don't develop health problems like hypertension, clogged ...

Awesome indictment of smog and symbolic love all in one dude.

Hi! Well, now that that's done, it is time to bid my farewell, fine Veer. It was very nice knowing you in this context, and I believe this visit to ...

Abusing rights is forcing someone else to do something they don't want to with their bodies because they were born with different reproductive equipment. Abusing rights is preventing a living ...

Don't listen to her. Capitalizing every line is cool!

Good job, Round. This chapter was a lot better than the first and all around enjoyable to read. The prose is definitely a lot more fluent, and the dialog is ...