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Re: Fantasticas: The Boy And His Staff
Very nice. While the narration can be a little flat, the dialogue is where you truly shine as a writer. Keep it up.
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: For worse or for better, we are better together
Thank YOU. I'll see what I can do, but don't get your hopes up, I don't review very often.
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: An unrealistic and very happy story about ants.
Cheers, m8
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Surviving You
No, it's the thought that counts.
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: the carpenter's son
I actually prefer the first phrasing to the rewording. It's really about maintaining a style and cadence, which I think she did well. The running together aspect is unfortunately true ...
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: the carpenter's son
Amazing!
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: Surviving You
Thanks :D
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: The Cow Movement- let???s spread the cud around
Meh, Orwell was one of many influences. I was never a huge fan of him, but his books are worth a read. Thanks for the kind words
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: The Life and Death of Belirious Bumble
Thank you!
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Surviving You
Hey Knowledge, thanks for the review and kind words. :) To start off, the inverted word order for the "I'll admit that" was intentional and intended for ripping effect. The ...
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Surviving You
Thanks! :)
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Surviving You
Thanks, Deamy. :)
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Hold Me Down
Nah, the clouds understood completely.
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
Wow thanks, Elo
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
I can't believe it. I like this one time yesterday and it goes up to 13 likes after 3 years. I'm like a celebrity.
Aug 28, 2013