CrazyArtsyLove

Ah, I totally agree with the advice here. I think what happened was the personal experience I was basing it on was so caught up in my head that I ...

I agree that you should exaggerate a little more. Think about creative ways you can put the properties of a paperclip to make it seem grand, or use the paperclip ...

I run back to that place we knew it feels like summer and looks like you but I stop myself like I should each time because going back there is ...

I find the poem very simplistic, but I think that was what you were going for. Even if you use that style, though, in my opinion it could still use ...