CrimsonArrow

Hey, so first of all, I really liked it. It was a little bit confusing (I guess because I'm not really used to this form). But here are somethings I ...

Hey, so I enjoyed the essay, it was really enjoyable to read. I don't breakfast, you know. I'm not really sure what you're trying to say in this sentence. The ...

Hey, so I think this is a very good build up. But, I do think in the next chapter you should introduce the love intrest. The grammar and overall usage ...

Hi, to start off, I didn't think it was absolutely terrible, in fact, it was quite memorable. There were some parts where, yeah, it was a little cheesy, but you ...

I like the beginning of this story, it has a good set up. But in the last paragraph, I would try splitting it into two paragraphs. The grammar is good, ...

This is really good. I liked how you repeated the lines, to give it more emphasis. There are some places where I would of used a different word, but that's ...

I enjoyed this, but I think you should space out stanza instead of just one huge mass of lines. Also, I think you should add some commas here and there, ...

I liked this a lot, but there are a few places I'd like to discuss. She had been taking a quiet, moonlit stroll on the sands when it had suddenly ...

I liked this poem, a lot. I didn't find any grammar errors, and they vocabulary you used was pretty good. I liked the kind of eerie essence you had, it ...

This is a really good poem, and I can't write poetry so I really enjoy reading it. And this entertained me. I'm sure you know of pricey pretty places I ...

I liked it, but I think it needs more of a plot which you could develop. Just this doesn't tell us anything about the characters or really the story at ...

This is a really good story overall. I don't think it's that long at all. And I really liked the part about the car not starting. I felt it added ...

It's very good. It has some grammar errors but other than that it is a good start. I actually have a chinchilla, his name is Chico. But he doesn't follow ...

The story was really good, I'm sorry I can't help you with a title, I'm not very good with that kind of stuff, sorry. But the story was good, you ...

When I saw the poem, I thought, 'Wait, I thought this was dramatic poetry.' Because a lot of the dramatic poems are somewhat long, so I was a little surprised, ...