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Re: An Amazing Poem
Today I glanced at a tangerine. It was green. Edit 1: The tangerine screamed. It took me well over an hour and plenty of editing. Please tare this peice apart, ...
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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010 :D
I had never really understood what NaNoWritMo was until now and I think that I might actually enter! :D
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
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Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: But then again, who believes a seal?
You know what, I hate the second version, and I'm going to get rid of it. xD Thank you heybeccahey! :D
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Big Brown Eyes
Hey there. I love this poem, I love the words, the description and the scene. But most of all, I love how misleading it is at first, how you expect ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: I'm Standing
Thank you Warrior Princess. :) I actually didn't know what a prose was, until I looked it up, so thanks for the new knowlage too! :D
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Kirja (Chapter Two)
Thanks again Sporks, this was really useful, and like the feedback in your last review, I will certainly take it into account. :D I will double check all my grammar ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Kirja (Chapter One)
Thank you so much for this thorough review, especially how you pointed out the key little bits that really make a difference. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it. ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: My Soul Soars to the Sky
xD I can't believe I spelt that wrong! -shot- Thank you both for your feeback, I do agree with the 'Throughout' part, and will change that. :) Thanks again! ~Crimmy
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: My Soul Soars to the Sky
So, another poem from Crimson. Still a little rusty and needs to be polished up, but I think that it's alright so far. The pitch Black Consumes my whole, Swimming, ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Kirja (Chapter One)
Hey there Rach, thanks for your critique, I will definitely take it into account. I'm going to PM you some questions about a couple of things you said, just to ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: I Must Have Missed the Important Part
I love this, it's great! It's short, sweet, doesn't drag on, and pure greatness (if that's a word). The only thing I spotted was He kisses my stained red lips ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: I Am Afraid
Hey, this is great! I loved the word choice and the way it flowed, I liked the repetition, but I think that maybe less lines could improve it. I don't ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Will Dream
Wow, this is a realy beautiful poem. I honestly can't find anything that needs to be changed. This poem is short sweet, an easy read and a really nice read ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Will Review for a Picture of Food.
Will you review the first two chapters of my novel please?
Aug 30, 2010